deviant art

Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]
more ▶

Featured in Groups:

Details

November 11, 2012
Sta.sh
Link
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 5
Favourites: 5 [who?]

Views: 248 (0 today)
[x]
This is part of chapter four of my story "Touched by a Guardian" let me know what you think!

*Jack's POV*

I felt someone's gaze on me and turned to see a girl with shoulder langth blond hair staring at me from across the street. I pretended not to notice, it must just be a coincidence, she can't really see me... no one can.

But as I ran, I could still feel her gaze following me. Trying to be safe then sorry, I twirled around and let out a laugh, trying to blend with the normal kids. When her attention focused elsewhere, I quickly crouched and leapt into the air. Holding my staff in my left hand I flew up into the clouds.

The familiar feeling of wind rushing through my snow white hair and ruffling my loose fitting jacket brought sheer joy to my soul.

"Whoo!" I screamed as I went into a dive and swooped through another big puffy cloud. Catching an updraft, I swung my staff under my feet and spun over and over.

"Yeah! 360! 720!" I hollered. I came back down to earth and dodged between the cars that were driving down the road. It was awesome that no one could see me! It meant I could get away with a lot! I swung my staff again, creating a small ice ramp, and slid up it, twisting in the air and bouncing off a truck that was driving by.

I felt I'd done enough in the town and moved outwards towards the woods. I slid down snow drifts and skidded over frozen puddles until I came to a lake that was still thawed. I stopped and smiled, "Well hello! How come you're not frozen too?" I said chuckling lightly, "here, let me help you."

I stepped back a little, my staff glowing blue at the tip, then ran out onto the lake; the water freezing under my feet. I skid across the ice with my bare feet barely touching the surface until I'd frozen the entire lake. I paused to look at my creation, it was beautiful little frost swirls were frozen into the surface.

Satisfied, I leapt back into the air and darted through the trees. Snow was falling, causing the land around me to move in a blur. I was so caught up in the joy of the moment, I didn't notice the tree that seemed to pop up out of no where. Right in front of me.



lol love the ending! Anyways if you'd like to read this story go here! [link]

Thanks for reading!
Ren♥
Add a Comment:
 
:iconjewelharmony:
Very well written, I like your discriptions, and Jack's personality really shines through. Would you mind(if you have the time) taking a look at my own fanfic of Jack Frost. It's called "As You Wish"? Thanks!
Reply
:iconphilstock2000:
*Philstock2000 Nov 11, 2012  Student Filmographer
sure! and thanks a lot!
Reply
:iconaskopaline:
~AskOpaline Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NICE!
Reply
:iconphilstock2000:
*Philstock2000 Nov 11, 2012  Student Filmographer
thank you!
Reply
:iconaskopaline:
~AskOpaline Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome~!
Reply
Add a Comment: